Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Harper, your story is well structured and clearly thought out. You've painted a picture with your words. I really enjoyed reading your imaginative story. You made me care about the characters and I had a good chuckle too. Mum
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Harper, your story is well structured and clearly thought out. You've painted a picture with your words. I really enjoyed reading your imaginative story. You made me care about the characters and I had a good chuckle too. Mum
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