Friday, 10 January 2020

One Small Step For Man

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Harper,

    It’s Leisha here from the Summer Learning Journey. I hope you have been enjoying your summer break so far!

    I love your poem! You have done well to make it rhyme and it is funny too. I like how you described the moon as lumpy, smooth and bumpy. I am also very impressed with how you have displayed this post. I think the colours you have used are really eye-catching. Ka pai!

    How do you think Neil Armstrong felt knowing he was the first man to walk on the moon? I imagine it would have been an amazing feeling!

    I really enjoyed reading this post Harper. Keep it up!

    Leisha
    :)

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